May 22 2009
Evaluation of “The Future is in Our Hands”
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Evaluation of “The Future is in Our Hands”
This documentary does a good job of informing the audience. There are multiple times throughout the film where facts were read off or were displayed on the screen, such as “4.5 billion for repair of federal buildings to increase energy efficiency using green technology.” This documentary did a good job of expressing logos which is the use of facts and the use of logic. This documentary also did a good job of persuading the audience by using pathos which is the use of emotions. The documentary was able to get on an emotional level when pictures of decaying earth and facts about dying animals were presented. By using pathos you make a huge impact on your audience. This documentary did a great job of effecting change because there were several visual metaphors that made the audience think about what the world is becoming. Also, pathos and logos helped with the effect of change because facts and emotions are major key things to have to persuade an audience.
What worked in this documentary was the presentation of facts. The facts were liable and they were cited which enhances ethos which is credibility. Also, the interviews that the documentary had were full of efficient and useful questions and answers. The main purpose of a documentary is to inform and to persuade and both of those key factors were expressed in this documentary.
What didn’t work in this documentary was the overall editing of the film. There were times throughout the film where a voice over was running while someone was doing an interview. This created a distraction and that distraction takes your audiences mind to the mistake not the information the documentary is trying to express. Also, from time to time facts were not displayed long enough to read and comprehend them. The clarity of the sound and the clarity of some screens need more improvement as well. Overall, the editing could improve for this documentary.
During this project I learned how to construct an effective film. I learned about various camera shots and how to make the film interesting. I also learned that a lot of research is needed for making a film. Throughout the process of researching I learned how to make efficient notes which helped speed up the film making process. By researching sustainability, I learned that there are several ways I can make a change in the world. Before I would not advocate going green, but after doing this project I have found that going green is easier than one may think. Blogging helped with expressing the emotions and information that I experienced during the film making process. It allowed me to vent my ideas in a productive manner and several people from around the world were able to watch our progress. By making this documentary I learned new things about organization. I learned that managing your time well makes every step a little bit easier and it reduces the stress level. By working with others I found that your organization skills have to be very good. When working with others you have to plan times that work for everyone. Also, working with others requires you to accept the new ideas your partners may have. While making this film my writing improved because I have learned that proper grammar should be used whenever you are writing for the world to see. Also, I have broadened my vocabulary which enhances my writing. Finally, I learned how to persuade and audience more efficiently.
I will use these things I have learned in the future throughout the rest of my life. I will use the new organization skills and writing skills to enhance my GPA. Also, I will use the new techniques of persuasion for job interviews and College interviews. This project has made me a better prepared person for the future. It has helped me emotionally and it has helped me to become a better student.
